Tuesday, September 18, 2007

Intro 2 to cause essay

Playing little league baseball being a nine year old girl was one of the most exciting times of my young life. I loved the feeling of being up to bat and waiting for the pitcher to throw me just the right pitch. I wanted my older brother to be proud to say that I was his little sister and being on his baseball team was just what I thought would achieve that goal. I also treasured the feeling of pride that my mom gave me when she cheered for me from the bleachers. Watching baseball games on television with my brother and playing with him and his friends out in my parents backyard also fueled my desire to play. Without these three reasons I never would have picked up a bat and developed the passion I have for baseball that I still carry with me today.

1 comment:

johngoldfine said...

I think I have a clear preference here (and a direction for the outro)--do you?